Jul 01 2011

Exaggerated similes

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Some children from our class were lucky enough to do  a poetry workshop with Brian Moses. Afterwards, they taught us how to write an exaggerated simile poem.

Here is an example of one line.

My glorious gorilla is as talented as a singer doing backflips on a trampoline.

10 responses so far

10 Responses to “Exaggerated similes”

  1.   Mr. Sumneron 01 Jul 2011 at 9:16 pm     1

    Excellent, those examples are as amazing as a magician that can climb into thin air before exploding into dandilion and burdock raindrops that seep together only to reform into the same magician.

  2.   theo and james yon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:53 pm     2

    Our Ancient Aphid is as tall as the highest bilding in the world on stilts and as strong as hulk and sandman put together

  3.   Bakhtawar and Aribahon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:47 pm     3

    Our Crazy Cat is very clever and crazy. It is as BIG as a elaphant. It is as tall as broshure Dubai (The tallest building in Dubai.)

  4.   kiera and oliviaon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:45 pm     4

    Are slimie slug is as fat as one thousend pigs

  5.   aranon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:42 pm     5

    my musterius mouse is bad as a robber with two machine guns.

  6.   Rosie&millieon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:39 pm     6

    Our strong sloth.
    It is as strong as an Elephant.
    It is as fast as a cheetah.
    I wish we could show you our strong sloth but he is in Jamaca.

  7.   Little L+Gon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:34 pm     7

    My crazy crocodile
    is as fat as 10 thousand elephants stuck in a mud hole
    and as long as a girrafe’s neck getting stretched into space.
    It is as smart as a chimp that has got 1 millian brains!
    I would like to show you my crazy crocodile but he is trying to figure out a crossword! You would NOT like to see him when you disturb him from his crosword.

  8.   Sam and James mon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:34 pm     8

    Our wierd wombat is as big as 9999 Old Traffords.
    He’s as tall as 1000 grown-up big blue whales.


  9.   adam and jakeon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:32 pm     9

    Our drunk dragon he is AS STRONG AS 6,000traford centers. he is as big as 1,000 giants.He is as fast as god.We would like to show you our drunk dragon but he is geting drunk.

  10.   luison 01 Jul 2011 at 2:29 pm     10

    My stupendus snail is as quick as a jumbo jet with a harry potter spell casted on it to make it utra speedy.