Jul 01 2011


Ten tired teachers

Filed under Lessons

We have been looking at lots of poems by Brian Moses this week. The first poems we wrote were based on his poem Behind the Staffroom Door.

Here is the first line to inspire you.

Ten tired teachers slumped in the staffroom at playtime,
one collapsed when the coffee ran out, then there were nine.

10 responses so far




10 Responses to “Ten tired teachers”

  1.   Rosa and Esmeon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:46 pm     1

    Ten swoly slugs sitting on a line one fell off and then there was nine.

  2.   theo and james yon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:44 pm     2

    Ten Pimply Poets having to pay a fine, one ran away and then there were nine.

  3.   Little L+Gon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:43 pm     3

    9 crazy criminals looking in a state, one died of illnes then there were eight : ()

  4.   adam and jakeon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:41 pm     4

    ten dum donkeys doing a crime one gets caght and then theres 9

  5.   Matthew+Jarvison 01 Jul 2011 at 2:32 pm     5

    Six vain vampirers feeling so alive then one died so there was five. 😉 😉

  6.   Shaan&jacobon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:31 pm     6

    When i was 7 i whent to heven and i ternd 11 and iam 27 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

  7.   sofiaon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:29 pm     7

    My exciting eagle is as tall a a t-rex on top of a sky scraper.

  8.   Bakhtawar and Aribahon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:27 pm     8

    Ten Perfect Poets sitting in a line,one fell off, then there were nine.

  9.   James and Samon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:25 pm     9

    Ten fat footballers drinking lots of wine, the boss caught them slacking then there were nine. 🙂 🙁

  10.   sofiaon 01 Jul 2011 at 2:20 pm     10

    Ten meen monkeys swinging on a vine one got caught then there was nine.